good dialogue- believable and in keeping with your day and age and characters. time how long the scenes you have wrote will be and if too short extend the speech of Jacob to his 'gang' otherwise a good and well thought out script
Developing the idea, think about how this looks on screen for closures to scenes to link to next one. For Tarantino need exploitation of races and their dialogue/myths/culture, along with graphic violence
End of Scene 1 requires closure, they embrace and she looks into the distance to see grafitti with racist slogan and tag from the Jewish Gang
Lyrics for a song - leading into...
Scene 2 Jacob needs some Racially stereotypes - ringlets and big black hats? Cutting them off - skinheads - Torah hand - quotes from the Torah verses - to reign him stylised - some closure to this scene - throws it away - dismisses his Faith as a racial thing Lyrics from a songs leading into...
Musical = we need some lyrics!!!
3ds scene - needs some graphic violence but stylised as looking 'cool' - stabbing most likely...
for how to connect scenes through musicals (Ensemble) Watch the scene from West Side Story - Tonight! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_QffCZs-bg
A solid idea to develop in more detailed film language *ie MICRO
good dialogue- believable and in keeping with your day and age and characters. time how long the scenes you have wrote will be and if too short extend the speech of Jacob to his 'gang' otherwise a good and well thought out script
ReplyDeleteDeveloping the idea, think about how this looks on screen for closures to scenes to link to next one. For Tarantino need exploitation of races and their dialogue/myths/culture, along with graphic violence
ReplyDeleteEnd of Scene 1 requires closure, they embrace and she looks into the distance to see grafitti with racist slogan and tag from the Jewish Gang
Lyrics for a song - leading into...
Scene 2 Jacob needs some Racially stereotypes - ringlets and big black hats? Cutting them off - skinheads - Torah hand - quotes from the Torah verses - to reign him stylised - some closure to this scene - throws it away - dismisses his Faith as a racial thing
Lyrics from a songs leading into...
Musical = we need some lyrics!!!
3ds scene - needs some graphic violence but stylised as looking 'cool' - stabbing most likely...
for how to connect scenes through musicals (Ensemble) Watch the scene from West Side Story - Tonight! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_QffCZs-bg
A solid idea to develop in more detailed film language *ie MICRO